Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 7/In the News/Peer Review One

Sston008 (talk) 19:12, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  THE ARTICLE WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN WITH FEW GRAMATICAL ERRORS. THE SIDEBAR QUOTES WERE GREAT TO READ. . THE QUESTIONS WERE WELL FORMATTED TO FIT THE TARGET GOALS. .

 Suggestions  CHECK OVER THE ARTICLE FOR THE QUOTATION CHANGES. . POSSIBLY ADDING MORE INFORMATION THAT ONE MIGHT FIND IN THE NEWS. I AM SURE THERE IS A GREAT AMOUNT. . 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.

Sston008 (talk) 19:14, 12 June 2009 (UTC)