Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 5/Experts Take Sides/Peer Review One

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  .THE QUOTES GAVE THE ARTICLE MORE LIFE. THE INSIGHT WAS QUITE NICE!! .NOT THAT MANY SPELLING ERRORS AND THE BOLD HEADINGS WERE UNDERLINED INDICATING A NEW SECTION.

 Suggestions  .THERE ARE A FEW SENTENCES THAT NEED REVISED THAT ARE TOO WORDY. .TWO MORE REFERENCES NEED TO BE CITED AND IN APA FORMAT. 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.

I BELIEVE THAT YOU CAN MAKE THIS AN EXCELLENT ARTICLE. YOU HAVE A GOOD FOUNDATION TO BUILD UPON. GOOD LUCK. Hcomb003 (talk) 01:21, 15 June 2009 (UTC)