Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 4/In the News/Peer Review One

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  . I see that you have a great grasp on what it takes to make teachers understand the importance of diversity awareness. . There is a lot of valid information that you have included in the article and many parts were well written.  Suggestions  . I think that including more sources and some attention to organization in the piece would really make the piece interesting and balanced. Make sure that you go on other articles to see how they made their sidebars and used the wikicode, which I know is difficult to understand, so that you make your piece more visually appealing. .The inclusion of the learning targets will also help to take you back through the article and ensure that you have clear questions that have answers that are easily found from reading the article. 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.