Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 3/Experts Take Sides/Peer Review One

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  . I THOUGHT THE INFORMATION WAS VERY INTERESTING AND LIKE HOW YOU OFFERED SEVERAL IDEAS, THINGS I HAD NOT READ BEFORE! . I LIKE THE PICTURE YOU CHOSE THAT REPRESENTED AN OLDER STYLE CLASSROOM, IT FIT THE IDEA OF YOUR ARTICLE

 Suggestions  . I SAW SEVERAL MECHANICAL/ GRAMMAR ERRORS, BE SURE TO PROOF READ . IT WAS DIFFICULT TO READ THE TEXT TO THE LEFT OF THE PICTURE, MAYBE TRY TO MAKE IT SMALLER WITH A LARGER MARGIN ON THE SIDE SO THAT WORDS WILL NOT BE CUT OFF. 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.