Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 2/In the News/Peer Review Two

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  . ARTICLE WAS WELL DEVELOPED. GREAT VOCABULARY USE. . UN-BIASED VIEWS BUT GOT A GREAT POINT ACROSS.

 Suggestions  . PROOFREADING IS SUGGESTED. . TRY TO MAKE SOME SENTENCES SHORTER, SOME SEEM TO CARRY OUT TOO LONG. 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.