Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 2/In the News/Peer Review One

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  . IDEAS BEHIND ARTICLES INTERESTING. . I DON'T LIKE GIVING CRITISM TO WRITING. I HAD TO DO THIS ASSIGNMENT. I HAD A FRIEND REVIEW YOUR PAPER AS WELL. THE ARTICLES, IF CITED PROPERLY, WITH ADDITIONAL SCHOLARLY REFERENCES, WOULD HAVE GIVEN AN INTERESTING TAKE ON EDUCATIONAL PHILOSOPHIES. TRY OUTLINING AND ADDING MORE THAN ONE SOURCE FOR EACH SUBTOPIC. ALSO, IF YOU ARE WRITING ON EDUCATIONAL PHILOSOPHIES, PERHAPS THAT COULD BE BETTER DEFINED IN YOUR INTRODUCTION. I HOPE THIS HELPS.

 Suggestions  .NEEDS REVISION...SENTENCE STRUCTURE, GRAMMAR, PUNCTUATION, MECHANICS..  .REVIEW SOURCES FOR CREDIBILITY. CITE PROPER APA FORMAT. 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.